my first crack at manga

EDIT: im getting negative rep over on mbb forums for saying this is originally my work, and i didnt. i just said this was my first attempt at making manga. i never claimed it as my own work. just my first attempt at DRAWING MANGA
here ya go. i got a little bored today and ive been interested in manga lately so i decided to try my own.



let me know what you think

I think you should try post your artwork @ deviantart for feedbacks and C&C/advice...

Imo the picture needs more colors and the face doesnt look manga to me...
Eyes for example...


Otherwise, keep it up!

a: manga is japanese

b: you're not japanese

c: you wrote it in english

d: what you made is a comic, not a manga.

*edit*

e: you misspelled "you're"

Deviantart is full of fake "manga" your piece would fit in quite well there. Other than that....it looks fine.

Drakon wrote:

a: manga is japanese

b: you're not japanese

c: you wrote it in english

d: what you made is a comic, not a manga.

*edit*

e: you misspelled "you're"

Deviantart is full of fake "manga" your piece would fit in quite well there. Other than that....it looks fine.

a: dont have to be japanese to draw manga

b: so if its in english? oh well

c: i have books and the sort on how to draw manga. theres about 6 different ways to do manga

d: ill be fixing the "you're" part. i was rushed and excited to get this out there